Wednesday, March 4, 2009

This is just you



Now you’re feeling it burn
Let the monster get out
It’s burning inside of you
Simply consuming all out

Let it just burn
Let it consume all that’s left
Let it get out,
The monster’s been spleeping too long
Just let it get out
Give it a chance to explain
Let it all bun
The flames leave but smoke
That’s what you are
A creature of mist
A creature of smoke
Let the monster clawl out
Let if be free
Give yourself in and let it be you
You won’t feel no pain
It’s just part of you
You won’t feel a thing
The others wont too
Let if be free
And only then can you fly
Will you elope
When it’s taking your hand
Guiding your steps
Let it burn out
Let it burn over
So it won’t destroy you
This is not a war
This is just you
Falling from
Hights you’ve never known
Diving too deep inside the howl
This is not a war
This won’t even hurt
Just let it burn out
The monster inside you
So it can be free
It will take your hands
And spin you around
And show you a new world
And give you your wings

Let it be free,
The monster inside you
Let it get out
Before it consumes you
It is part of yourself
So let it take over…


["Just swallow this song
Don't ask yourself why
This torture now falls
You can't imagine how long
It took me to find you
Lost my grip upon life
And now it's all over...";


to F., to M., to R., to O., to A., to ML., to C., to C., to Mk., to V., to DD., to...many others...]

6 comments:

Dan Glăvan said...

A post full of feelings and emotions...very expressive, especially when you're reading those lines with the song in the background. I was impressed to realize my mind flew to far far away places,thoughts and people...don't know if it was the music, the lyrics in it or the lines I read, but it certainly has a mesmerizing effect :)

eternity forever said...

Thank you Dan...I had the same feeling when I wrote it...I didn't think about what I was writing...this..."thing" (poem? song? no idea..) just came about by herself...it's in a rough state but I don't think I'm going to change anythign about it...

Mike129 said...

Good song; beautiful prose; great combination.

It made me breathe deeply; it snatched at my heart.

*sigh*

Blues said...

How right you are! Wonderfully depicted.

Let it be free,
The monster inside you
Let it get out
Before it consumes you
It is part of yourself
So let it take over…


Rock!

eternity forever said...

Yep Bluesfrau... Elvis said the world's a stage and we must play upon it...well why act...? let's put moral and social rules aside for a moment and see how it is to be as humans are in their pure state...

And I do believe man is by nature mean and selfish...unfortunately...

Blues said...

I don't think humans are mean by nature... I think they have just learned to play that part very well - without much liking it. Because... you're a human, aren't you? And you are not mean, are you? I believe, however, that we have the potential to be mean, and we have the ability to control this potential. And both of these, the potential and the ability - are nature. and therefore, we are naturally able to be not mean... I believe that humans naturally crave something and become mean if they don't feel that they receive it - therefore not giving any of it out ... what I mean is: Love. *sigh*...