I would really apreciate any piece of advice, critics, ideas...
[I added the original piece that inspired me. I never took any drawing lessons so I need an image or an object to look at or at least some elements in order to draw...I can't imagine all the details...]
[She, crying alone beside the walls; He enters the stage though Hell‘s Gate]
She (towards the skies) :
Drawn by temptation towards insecurity I tried to avoid all the traps laid before me
(towards him, rapidly) : I beg of you! Rescue me from this full of hate place Before the insanity of it all leaves any trace! Please give me back what I’ve tenfold given away Fly me to love, take me to Heaven, save me I pray! Take my purposeless being giving me yours Giving a reason to pass to all my life’s hours...
...
Chorus (slowly, in a murmur): Listen…the evil around screams in despair For love and truth somehow won though they fought fair All the bad and sadness and loneliness cry ‘Cause dark was again spread by one spark in an eye...
[ listening to http://www.deezer.com/track/720511 ]
[to M.; Because no matter how hard we try or how much we want to do it we just can't read through flesh...and because white sheets are perfect to wrap up any dirty secret...what a paradoxe...]
[Ils sont arrivés Se tenant par la main L'air émerveillé De deux chérubins...
Et quand j'ai fermé La porte sur eux Y avait tant de soleil Au fond de leurs yeux Que ça m'a fait mal, Que ça m'a fait mal...]
Et je me rappelle Quand je t’ai vu La première fois Que tu souriais Et tu regardais Droit dans ses yeux…
Et je me rappelle Même si c’est flou Que tu t’es penchée Et t’as chuchotée Je n’ai pas entendu…
Et je me rappelle Quand je t’ai vu Cette première fois Quand tu souriais Alors j’ai compris Que tu me mentais…
Et je me rappelle Quand toi tu m’as vu La première fois Le brun de mes yeux Il s’est tout fondu En claires ruisseaux…
Et je me rappelle Quand je t’ai vu La première fois Quand tu regardais Tout droit dans ses yeux… Alors j’ai compris Que tu me mentais… Et tout s’est fondu En claires ruisseaux…
[to F., to his M.; top lyrics: "Les amants d'un jour" - Edith Piaf]
Now you’re feeling it burn Let the monster get out It’s burning inside of you Simply consuming all out
Let it just burn Let it consume all that’s left Let it get out, The monster’s been spleeping too long Just let it get out Give it a chance to explain Let it all bun The flames leave but smoke That’s what you are A creature of mist A creature of smoke Let the monster clawl out Let if be free Give yourself in and let it be you You won’t feel no pain It’s just part of you You won’t feel a thing The others wont too Let if be free And only then can you fly Will you elope When it’s taking your hand Guiding your steps Let it burn out Let it burn over So it won’t destroy you This is not a war This is just you Falling from Hights you’ve never known Diving too deep inside the howl This is not a war This won’t even hurt Just let it burn out The monster inside you So it can be free It will take your hands And spin you around And show you a new world And give you your wings
Let it be free, The monster inside you Let it get out Before it consumes you It is part of yourself So let it take over…
["Just swallow this song Don't ask yourself why This torture now falls You can't imagine how long It took me to find you Lost my grip upon life And now it's all over...";
to F., to M., to R., to O., to A., to ML., to C., to C., to Mk., to V., to DD., to...many others...]
